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Dec. 31st, 2004 12:49 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
framlingemAaah! One of my favorite writers reviewed one of my fics! And they were impressed! AUUUUGH! *flails*. I feel like an amateur guitar player being told 'cool licks' by Hendrix or Gilmour. Probably Gilmour.
Wah!
Beautiful. What a sad time to write about, but you so poetically capture the melancholy. One of my favourite aspects of your writing is that you weave the outside world into your character's thoughts. The most stunning line:
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The snow is falling so very thickly. The world outside seems muffled, and he keeps his own breathing to an absolute minimum, afraid that if he makes too much noise the world will break. It seems fragile in the diffused glow of the streetlamp across the way, as if he is in a snow-globe made of glass which keeps him apart from the rest of the world.
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The imagery, description, and emotion fit so tightly together, and I happen to be a complete sucker for full moon stories; this was a pleasure to read. Keep up the good work.
-k-
Wah!
Beautiful. What a sad time to write about, but you so poetically capture the melancholy. One of my favourite aspects of your writing is that you weave the outside world into your character's thoughts. The most stunning line:
quote:
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The snow is falling so very thickly. The world outside seems muffled, and he keeps his own breathing to an absolute minimum, afraid that if he makes too much noise the world will break. It seems fragile in the diffused glow of the streetlamp across the way, as if he is in a snow-globe made of glass which keeps him apart from the rest of the world.
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The imagery, description, and emotion fit so tightly together, and I happen to be a complete sucker for full moon stories; this was a pleasure to read. Keep up the good work.
-k-
