Creative, my ass.
Oct. 20th, 2004 06:52 pmIt occurs to me that I am completely and utterly pants at writing temporal transitions. I can hardly document every minute and action in the life of my character, and yet there's only so much 'hours passed', 'some time later', 'that evening', 'eventually', and 'finally' I can take as a reader, so I refuse to overdo it as a writer.
*bangs head on desk repeatedly*
In other news, I am now warm and toasty in my polar fleece socks, corduroys, and blue SWGC hoodie. Usually when I'm cold I put on my Celtae toque, but as that took a dip as well today, I can't.
*bangs head on desk repeatedly*
In other news, I am now warm and toasty in my polar fleece socks, corduroys, and blue SWGC hoodie. Usually when I'm cold I put on my Celtae toque, but as that took a dip as well today, I can't.
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Date: 2004-10-21 08:34 am (UTC)I have never heard this expression, but I already love it dearly, 'cause well, pants.
As for your writing dilemma, what about summing up the empty time- "After an uneventful bicycle trip" or adding a mini-event "After avoiding several unsupervised children, two sociopathic truck drivers, and an unexpected moose, he arrived at his destination." Okay, maybe not quite like that, but you get the idea.
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Date: 2004-10-21 09:33 am (UTC)I believe I have solved the dilemna. It was found while writing a Harry Potter fic - likest thou Harry Potter fics?
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Date: 2004-10-21 09:36 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-10-21 10:01 am (UTC)The (unedited) bits can be found on FFnet, where they are currently garnering preliminary feedback, under the title "A Paris Tradition" by Framling (that would be me).